韦洛克拉丁语教程第二课 课后阅读翻译 新手求指导

(p.s.文中长音符号在相应字母后以-表示)原文:Puella mea me- no-n amat.Vale- puella!Catullus obdu-rat: poe-ta puellam no-n amat,fo-rmam puellae no-n laudat,puellae rosa-s no-n dat,et puellam no-n ba-siat!I-ra mea est magna!Obdu-ro-,mea puella-sed sine te- no-n valeo-.
我的英文译文:My girl doesn't love me.Goodbye,girl!Cattllus is tough:the poet doesn't love the girl,doesn't praise her beauty(此处系为流畅而改动),doesn't give her roses,and no more kisses her!I'm too angry!Tough,my girl-but I'm not at all good without you.
中文译文:我的姑娘不再爱我了.再见,姑娘!卡提卢斯坚定地说:我不会再爱上她,不会再赞美她的美丽,不会再送鲜艳的玫瑰给她,也不会再亲吻她!我多么恼怒!但是,我不得不承认,姑娘-没有你,我过得一点也不好.
中文译文为了流畅做了一些修改,可能破坏了原意,也会有语法不对的地方,希望大家帮忙指出,谢谢.